Definitely lost some energy between the two, not a fan with how the legs came out in the cleaner version as well.
I really liked the head shape in the rough sketch for this one, pretty happy with the cleaner version as well. The pose is pretty awkward in both, and the shapes of the body could follow a more consistent logic (should have finished that arm too). I liked this one though, was good practice! I included a close up as well since it's primarily what I focused on.